Contents Page Draft

The star seems to big and stands out alot so i will change the colour and shape so it fits in the page appealingly.

Front Cover Draft

After recieving feedback i have decided to improve the title block by adding a black outline to make it stand out in front of the graffiti. I will also change the font of the puffs which seem hard to read and look rather plain. I will add another puff and the issue number to make it look more proffesional.